Editing action plan

after discussing our feedback we were quite pleased with the comments we received.
some people said they thought that when travelling to the barn it went on for too long and the shots were all quite similar, although they thought this could have been improved this was exacty the effect we were hoping for, we wanted the car journey down to the car to create tension and make the audience want to know what was going to happen.
we will add some more transitions in between shots to make them more interesting and this will help them flow better in to eachother.
we cannot use any more diagetic sound as there is none appropraite. however, i think the sound that we have works well.
finally, our next step is to add titles to our footage.